tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post21767315932953104..comments2023-12-23T04:37:14.632-08:00Comments on Gaia Garden: Summertime HaikuGaia Gardener:http://www.blogger.com/profile/00692281131036600613noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-8830559017123703382007-08-15T06:58:00.000-07:002007-08-15T06:58:00.000-07:00You lost your syllable count in the 2nd line with ...You lost your syllable count in the 2nd line with the rewrite. Besides, I like "soggy".<BR/><BR/>Hmmm... Try again. The first one is more vivid.<BR/><BR/>(Editors that force rewrites are horrible, aren't they?)Gaia Gardener:https://www.blogger.com/profile/00692281131036600613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-11451251827628097002007-08-14T23:34:00.000-07:002007-08-14T23:34:00.000-07:00A relevant web comicJust so you know, slashdot's b...<A HREF="http://xkcd.com/301/" REL="nofollow">A relevant web comic</A><BR/><BR/>Just so you know, slashdot's billing is "news for nerds, stuff that matters"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-591330606262472182007-08-14T21:47:00.000-07:002007-08-14T21:47:00.000-07:00Streams of sweat drippingthrough my fully soaked s...Streams of sweat dripping<BR/>through my fully soaked shirt<BR/>F this climate change<BR/><BR/>How's that?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-76125013021421032132007-08-14T19:48:00.000-07:002007-08-14T19:48:00.000-07:00Well, it's not a particularly PRETTY image, Qkslvr...Well, it's not a particularly PRETTY image, Qkslvrwolf, but it sure is a vivid one!!!! <BR/><BR/>Need a different 2 syllable word for one of the "dripping"s though, to really make it prime.... Otherwise it's oddly excellent.Gaia Gardener:https://www.blogger.com/profile/00692281131036600613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-86667271951014414722007-08-13T21:00:00.000-07:002007-08-13T21:00:00.000-07:00Oh yeah...limericks rock.Oh yeah...limericks rock.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-5555304919254898592007-08-13T20:58:00.000-07:002007-08-13T20:58:00.000-07:00Streams of sweat drippingthrough my soggy dripping...Streams of sweat dripping<BR/>through my soggy dripping shirt<BR/>F this climate change.<BR/><BR/>;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24376388.post-19778467978771461812007-08-12T20:22:00.000-07:002007-08-12T20:22:00.000-07:00These are good. Please do moreThese are good. Please do moreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com